Thanks for commenting Abby! I'm glad you like it! And if you want to be a vet go for it! and I wanted to be a pilot because my mom wanted to and I am facinated of flying and planes. My other career is a Chemical Scienctist
Hey there King, my name is Maddie im a year 7 at YMS. this is an amazing blog post. I want to be a lawyer when I get older, I liked how you presented this slide and told the reader what you you have to do to reach this goal of being a pilot, why did you want to be a pilot? do you know anyone thats a pilot? Maybe next time you could try a new format other than slide like piktochart or flipsnack. Kai Pai. Sincerely, Maddies YMS.
Hi there King, My name is Abby and I am a year 7 at Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short if you wanted to know.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you said what you were doing, how long it was for and did a great job adding lots of things in your work.
This reminds me of a couple of times we have had to say what job we want in the future. Being a pilot would be cool, I want to be a vet.
Next time you could add in what you found hard to find out or more information why you want to be a pilot.
Was there another career that you wanted to have?
Kind Regards,
Abby.
Thanks for commenting Abby! I'm glad you like it! And if you want to be a vet go for it! and I wanted to be a pilot because my mom wanted to and I am facinated of flying and planes. My other career is a Chemical Scienctist
DeleteRegards - King from Pt England School
Hey there King, my name is Maddie im a year 7 at YMS.
ReplyDeletethis is an amazing blog post. I want to be a lawyer when I get older, I liked how you presented this slide and told the reader what you you have to do to reach this goal of being a pilot, why did you want to be a pilot? do you know anyone thats a pilot?
Maybe next time you could try a new format other than slide like piktochart or flipsnack. Kai Pai.
Sincerely, Maddies YMS.