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Monday 3 December 2018

Francis Pt.2

Francis Pt.2

After the incident had happened a investigative search team had used a large and cliché vessel to search for the body of Francis Brandywine in the middle of the night.

After about 20 minutes of searching, their engine spluttered and broke down. They tried to contact land but they had no signal, now they were stranded in the middle of the lake. They donned on their old and busted life jackets and then hoped for the best then just like Francis a still knock was heard, knock,knock,knock. Now all 10 of them were scared. They rushed to their engine to try and fix it but just before they can get their hands on the engine it was dragged down to the dark, pristine water.

A minute past, then 10, then 20 just before they thought it was over another knock was heard but it
was even louder, Knock,Knock,Knock. The floorboards were knocked up and threw a man overboard. They looked over slowly, and the unimaginable happened, they saw the body of Francis Brandywine in the water. They jumped back in shock and disbelief as they just saw the body but the body was cut in half with cuts and bruises all over the body. They looked again but the body was gone. After that a crew member found paddles and everyone was relieved and started
paddling. They paddled for about 2 minutes, but they didn’t move, they were anxious. They had no more hope and cried for help until they went hoarse. They tried to paddle again, then again and then again but no progress.

One crew member jumped off the boat to try and reach land. But before he reached the shore a slimy
and disgusting arm rose from the water and took the terrified man. But then the engine suddenly appeared and started. They quickly rushed to the engine and went to shore. They jumped off but before they touched the ground the same monster rose and took all of them.

Walt: ...

In the last three weeks had to make a sequel to a story by Dave Eggars named Francis Brandywine.



Writing For An Audience



Walt: Write for a range of audiences

This week we did a slide and this slide was all about writing for a range for audiences. Like 1-10 Years Old or 11-20 Years Old. Then we had to free write another story from our on range of age