Revolting Stories

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A Long, long time ago a beautiful maiden named belle was strolling by the beautiful and green forest on the edge of the town but then a big and hairy beast kidnapped her and took her to a castle. The merciless beast locked her in a cold and malicious  room for 5 days and only gave her bread every 2 days. But the beast did not provide her any water but there was a window and whenever it rained she drank out of a loose rain pipe hanging out of the window.

But suddenly the door open so she ran out and shouted for aid but the beast grabbed her and threw her back into the room. She shouted and shouted for help. Then at midnight the door broke down, it was his brother and friends but the door woke up the beast and threw them in the room with belle. But one broke out and went to tell others. But while that was happening belle’s brother planned a escape to break the window and make a run for it. But the beast heard the daring plan quickly grabbed them and threw them in a big, yellow case. Where they quietly sat watched while the beast nailed thick slabs of wood on the window. But belle’s brother was desperate to escape the castle and made another plan. But after belle’s brother said the plan the door blew up and they saw the other brother that got out holding blocks of C4 and a AK47. But again the beast heard it and woke ut but the beast made a wrong decision because the villagers jumped him and they stabbed and strangled him then they walked out bleeding, bruised and traumatized but they went on ‘till another day

Walt: Use descriptive vocab to paint a picture in our readers minds

Today I published a story that i had made myself it is my take on the fairy tale Beauty and the Beast